April 17, 2010

NaPoWriMo #17

Element One

Break out the wind,
the sky, the whole body
contained inside.

We feel the earth:
above us stretches
emptiness stained with
silver.
From top to bottom,

this planet screams for
liberation,

a caged wild child
with an unfree soul.

The body complains.

5 comments:

Single Winged Butterfly said...

Can you please delete the one on top. And please go t0 my blog. Killingmesweetly.blogspot.com

Maya Ganesan said...

@SWB: done! :)

Single Winged Butterfly said...

Thank you for commenting! And thank you for deleting the top. Anyways GREAT BLOG!

Jessie Carty said...

i'm so immature today (well most days for a 35 year old) but the first line made me giggle :)

Milli said...

Pure awesomeness, Maya!