allegro: that rebel moon is shining

January 28, 2011

I feel the pulse of breath under

my collarbone, steady --

like the pulse of my steps, tracing a circle in

the grass where I can't find an exit.

Fall down the rabbit hole and I know I'll find you

when you land.

Julia said...: last line reminds me of alice in wonderland. <3; January 28, 2011 at 5:07 PM
Odessa said...: maya, i love,love,love the last line! yess..very alice in wonderland.

i hope you don't mind if i will quote you on my blog.; January 28, 2011 at 8:35 PM
Maya Ganesan said...: @odessa: Of course not! I would be honored!; January 28, 2011 at 8:36 PM
Myrna Foster said...: I also love "tracing a circle in the grass where I can't find an exit."

Thanks for sharing this one, Maya!; January 28, 2011 at 10:33 PM
The Snarky Narwhal said...: oooooh mysterious, i likey; January 29, 2011 at 6:23 AM
Apoorva Chowdhary said...: Ditto pinkapplecore. :); January 29, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Maya Ganesan said...: Thank you for all the sweet comments!; January 29, 2011 at 12:37 PM