chasing cherries
under this yellow-white-gray sky
wind swaying hips
tugging on strings
(who knows where)
and i know somewhere else
girls are dancing
and i'm just
finding red
copyright Maya Ganesan 2009
Disclaimer: this is unedited, so it'll go through revision later. Just a first draft...
And the strings in the second stanza are a reference to the string theory.
8 comments:
I heart this
You are one talented eleven year old!
Lovely!
Oh, it's magic, this. Like a picture.
Maya, I just saw that Miss Erin has a planned interview of you for the Summer Blog Blast Tour and I CANNOT WAIT. I've read other bits of you here and there, but you talking with Erin should be dynamite and inspired.
As all your poems (even your first one) are.
Love
b
Aw, you are so sweet, Beth!
"finding red"
Love that!
I love the last stanza
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