April 07, 2009

NaPoWriMo #7

Without Wings

Angels call my name,

*gone*

This one was inspired by Kelly Clarkson's "Behind These Hazel Eyes." And re: the angels, they're just fascinating poem subjects. Why not?

(I just realized this took me precisely ten minutes to write. Figures. This is one of my worse NaPo poems.)

5 comments:

Cassandra said...

This was very interesting to read. Nicely done. :)

odessa said...

"there's just my breathing that stabs the silence now" - love this phrase.

maya, you've been really good with NaPoWriMo. keep it up!

Sherry said...

I love the images this poem conveys.

Cuileann said...

"shards of silence" - perfect.

Cuileann said...

And this has an interesting Gothic feeling.