April 07, 2009

NaPoWriMo #7

Without Wings

Angels call my name,


This one was inspired by Kelly Clarkson's "Behind These Hazel Eyes." And re: the angels, they're just fascinating poem subjects. Why not?

(I just realized this took me precisely ten minutes to write. Figures. This is one of my worse NaPo poems.)


Cassandra said...

This was very interesting to read. Nicely done. :)

odessa said...

"there's just my breathing that stabs the silence now" - love this phrase.

maya, you've been really good with NaPoWriMo. keep it up!

Sherry said...

I love the images this poem conveys.

Cuileann said...

"shards of silence" - perfect.

Cuileann said...

And this has an interesting Gothic feeling.