January 28, 2011

that rebel moon is shining


I feel the pulse of breath under
my collarbone, steady --
like the pulse of my steps, tracing a circle in
the grass where I can't find an exit.

Fall down the rabbit hole and I know I'll find you
when you land.

7 comments:

Julia said...

last line reminds me of alice in wonderland. <3

Odessa said...

maya, i love,love,love the last line! yess..very alice in wonderland.

i hope you don't mind if i will quote you on my blog.

Maya Ganesan said...

@odessa: Of course not! I would be honored!

Myrna Foster said...

I also love "tracing a circle in the grass where I can't find an exit."

Thanks for sharing this one, Maya!

The Snarky Narwhal said...

oooooh mysterious, i likey

Apoorva Chowdhary said...

Ditto pinkapplecore. :)

Maya Ganesan said...

Thank you for all the sweet comments!