June 11, 2011

Flight

*poof*

I am planning to take this one down in a couple of days. Just wanted to put it up for your critique. :)

2 comments:

Alex Doran said...

I like it, Maya :)

It's interesting how a group of words can be so powerful and deep.

I have to say, it's like reading Li Bai, Du Fu, or Wang Wei.

Nice job on poetry presentations, by the way :)

Apoorva Chowdhary said...

Oh. I guess I was too late then....