April 17, 2010

NaPoWriMo #17

Element One

Break out the wind,
the sky, the whole body
contained inside.

We feel the earth:
above us stretches
emptiness stained with
From top to bottom,

this planet screams for

a caged wild child
with an unfree soul.

The body complains.


Verenda Harrt said...

Can you please delete the one on top. And please go t0 my blog. Killingmesweetly.blogspot.com

Maya Ganesan said...

@SWB: done! :)

Verenda Harrt said...

Thank you for commenting! And thank you for deleting the top. Anyways GREAT BLOG!

Jessie Carty said...

i'm so immature today (well most days for a 35 year old) but the first line made me giggle :)

emily said...

Pure awesomeness, Maya!