April 28, 2010

NaPoWriMo #28

Ride-In Direction

Morning. One-way
street, you better go
left or turn back
the way you came,
two hundred dollars in
your hands.
Hold on, the ride
hasn't stopped yet,
the roller coaster still
hasn't finished its
loop-the-loop. You
better go now,
left or turn back
the way you came.


Erin said...

This flows so nicely; I really like it.

Jessie Carty said...

seriously are you writing a novel in verse cause i see this as another potential one for a series :)