April 04, 2010

NaPoWriMo #4

Wet Town

October leaves take flight.
From my night-window I

rain pouring into rain. I slide
the glass away:

water floods my skin.


Happy Easter!


Anonymous said...

Pretty good posts !☻ keep writing.

Priya said...

I like the first stanza a lot.

emily said...

I really like the first stanza too!
Happy Easter:]

Danielle said...

very smooth. :)